Thursday, November 19, 2009

essay 5#

Hey Joe Bob"
I got your message,and I think you should take him up on his offer.It may be your last chance to make the cross over.And beside it is a zoo here so get out while you can.This way the aliens can't get you, and it is important for you can fake them out. And Bob just think about the things you can do in this new world.I'm so glad you told me about this. I will go with you.I'm sure the new world won't let us down.Arkon sounds like a good friend,just because he told you what was going on.I will give you three reason why you should go.One of the reasons you should go it will give you peace of mind,with this peace of mind you will not have to look aver your shoulder for aliens or any one else that you think might want to harm you.Two this place will offer you,your dream of a life time.Remember your dream was alway to have a wife and family and two kids wasn't it? The big house and lots of land for the kids to play and a big tree so you could put a swing on it for the kid and push your wife at night and watch the stars.Three and at last you can become that star fighter you wanted to be.You would have one of the grestest jobs in the world being that star fighter,how many peopl can say their job is to protect the planet.so get back to me on this.

1 comment:

  1. Good reasons, though you could use more details to support. And some pragraphing would be nice too!

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